TLC by Chrouya
Script:	 Hentai Ouji to Warawanai Neko - 1 [TLed][Timed]
Workraw: Hentai Ouji 01 [WR]

**Double check capitalization at the beginning of the line**
**somber == stony**
**Pervert Prince = Perverted Prince {or maybe even Prince Pervert!}**
**Steel Queen = Steel King** {see note in line 9}

2
"I do not regret that I have lived in pursuit of pleasure"
"Never have I regretted the decision of living in pursuit of pleasure".
{this sounds better}

9
President of the Athletics Club, The Steel Queen!
President of the Athletics Club, The Steel King!
{I would translate this as King, because of the more masculine feeling in that word (more power)}
{the manga has "Iron King"}

12
I just sorta happened to be there. It was a coincidence!
I just sorta happened to be there. It was an accident!
{this sounds more natural}

16
I have made my decision.
Whatever, I have made my decision.
{She first talks off the matter before saying the abovementioned}

25
You work hard on your squats with passion everyday.{He's a pr0 peeper with good stamina >:D}
and worked hard on your squats with passion every single day.
{slight fixing}

33
I say again: swimsuits.
{/i1}I say again: swimsuits.{/i0}
{thought}

35
Explain this, in detail.
Explain, in detail.
{sounds more like an order}

38
At this rate, I'll end up getting the President post, and I cba.
At this rate, I'm forced to take up the tedious role of the president!
{lol}

39
If I don't put my foot down here, I'll regret it for the rest of my life!{timing check}
{lit. If I don't tell the truth here}

44
I never can seem to say what I really want.{It's because of the shit you WANT to say :D}
My words never seem to come out the way I want them to.
{different phrasing}

46
I want to just think about girls!
I just want to keep thinking about girls!
{adding the keep for the "motto" translation, moving the just}
{perhaps add an "only" somewhere}

50
Yokodera, there's something I want to give you.
Yokodera, I got just the thing for you in that case.
{more contextual}

52
The legendary "Welcoming spring: the complete works of Princess Hajime"
The complete works of the legendary "Welcoming Spring - Popping the Cherries"
{no comment.}
{adapt signs 53 and 54 accordingly}

73
Do you know the statue of the somber cat on the Ipponsugi hill?
Do you know the statue of the stony cat on the Ipponsugi hill?
74
The somber cat.
The stony cat.
{because of it's english translation in the title}

75
If you make an offering there,
{Consider: 'token offering'}

77 SIGN
伝説の抱き枕
碧眼のマーガレットさん
The legendary body pillow
Blue-eyed Margaret-san
{eventually leave the san out if you want}

79
So I gave my dakimakura over as an offering, and what do you know.{timing check}
So I gave my unneeded dakimakura over as an offering, and what do you know.{timing check}
{add the TL of jama}

80
I got rid of my desires and was refreshed!
I bade farewell to my desires, and I was totally revitalized!

83 SIGN
伝説の抱き枕
炎をまといしバーバラさん
The legendary body pillow
Flame-clad Barbara-san
{perhaps engulfed in flames?}

92
No it isn't! I didn't see anything! Let's just say I didn't see anything!
Whatever! I didn't see anything! Let's just say I didn't see anything!

97
NO way! There's no love in something like that!
NO way! Not when there's no love involved in it!
{different context}

109
I want to stay pretty until then!
I want to stay pure until then!
{I'd use pure in this context}

112
I am pure.
I am clean.
113
If you're really a safe and pure person, please get off me.
If you're really a safe and clean person, please get off me.
{if 109 gets applied, this might be a nice change of pace}

124
"Have the man you shamed you take responsibility"{timing check}
"Have the man who shamed you take responsibility"
{typo}

166
The smell of sweat and eros in the air!
Erotica drifting through the air through the smell of sweat!

168
Azuki-san! I love you! I love you so much!{timing check and whatever he's saying in the background}
{I'd write it like this:}
Azuki-san! I'm totally head over heels over you!
I love you so much! Please go out with me!
{Chou aishitemasu tsukiatte kudasai!}

186
She turns down the guys rather harshly.
She turns down the guys rather harshly like a real princess.
{missing the first part of the line}

192
Did you get bitten by something strange-{timing check}
Did you get bitten by a badly-disciplined dog or something, how noisy.
{I at least hear shitsuke no warui == bad discipline == no manners}

199
You're pretty damn lucky, you know?
You're pretty damn lucky, Miss Flat-Chested!
{daihinnyuu: oh great small breasts...really?}

304
Y-Yeah. I don't want to hear any style tips from you!{:x}
Y-Yeah. Can you just stop pointing out every single thing?!
{shiteki suru = point out}

305
nyan nyan nyan nyan nyan nyan nyan {tlc plz I think I got close though.}
That's like giving a comforter to a fluffy penguin!
{gotta admit, this sentence was hell and I cheated.}

319
I was just following my own desires.{timing check? Is there more to this line?}
A favor for a favor, something like that.
{http://tangorin.com/general/%E3%81%86%E3%81%8A%E3%81%94%E3%81%93%E3%82%8D}
{I guess it's toying one another as in favor for a favor.}

323
She was just following her desires.
So she returned you a favor for a favor, huh.
{confusing stuffs going on here, making her think they're dating}

336
That was a fatal strike, Mr.Pervert.
You're lethally perverted.
{it's an adjective to pervert, so it must be liberalized}

354
But I'm getting punched and suffering this much.{timing check}
But I'm suffering so much due to the beating I received since I've been cursed.
{timing has to be extended to "konna ni kurou shiterunda"}
355
I won't feel okay unless I tell her what's going on!{timing check}
I won't feel at ease unless I have a word with her!
{fixed slightly}

357
I know it now!
I've realized it ever since I put my eyes on you!
{make it feel more like a confession!}

386
Yay! I suppose you can hand around.
Yay! I'm as happy as a rolling cheetah!
{yeah she says some stupid stuff xD}